I was installing Java JRE today and something caught my eye that really bothered me. The sentence they showed on screen goes like this:
“by installing Java, you will be able to experience the power of Java by Sun Micro…”
“the Java powered Internet is now available to you. You can experience the wide variety of fun”
I don’t know if its just me, but these two sentences are very awkward. The first one is repetitive, and the second one is using a passive voice.
Am I wrong? Any English lit. majors out there care to comment??